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YES SOFTCORE PORNOGRAPHY!
I like the ambition you have with these poses, because they feel more natural than your older pages (I looked at them to understand this better).
With this one I have a problem. The poses, as natural as they are, are relaying nothing whatsoever with the background. The gradients try to tell me something in a whisper, but I see them less as helping and more pointing out that this comic, with its serious tone and captivating writing, lacks atmosphere. Even the simplest of shapes in the background could tell us better where the character was or where she is going. We have to fill in the blanks ourselves, and these blanks should be less guesswork and more "That was so badass I barely noticed it!"
I like the ambition you have with these poses, because they feel more natural than your older pages (I looked at them to understand this better).
With this one I have a problem. The poses, as natural as they are, are relaying nothing whatsoever with the background. The gradients try to tell me something in a whisper, but I see them less as helping and more pointing out that this comic, with its serious tone and captivating writing, lacks atmosphere. Even the simplest of shapes in the background could tell us better where the character was or where she is going. We have to fill in the blanks ourselves, and these blanks should be less guesswork and more "That was so badass I barely noticed it!"